2018华威大学生物医学工程专业留学文书范文 我跟克隆”多利羊“同名
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华威大学是英国顶尖研究型大学，在工、商、政、学各界均拥有较好口碑，高欢迎度和就业率吸引了众多国际学生申请就读，本文将带来成功申请华威大学生物医学工程专业的优质文书一篇，该文书申请者还拿到了伦敦帝国理工学院、伦敦国王学院、英国伦敦大学学院等高校offer。
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个人陈述范文：
Being nicknamed after sheep isn't something to be proud of, but the fact that most people in my neighbourhood know me as "Dolly" reveals my passion for genetic engineering. My fascination with science began in primary school and thanks to a desire to delve deeper into the scientific principles that govern this world and use them to develop technology that can resolve our problems, it gradually developed into a career choice.
开头将自己的名字”多利“与基因工程相联系，显示出申请者的风趣，巧妙引入主题。
I am doing bioinformatics research on Gall Bladder Cancer at the IIT- Varanasi. By studying the protein-protein interactions of gall bladder carcinoma, I hope to identify its biomarkers. This is helping me better understand the work i can do in the field of healthcare and medicine as a biomedical engineer and gain knowledge from the experienced professors who guide me. Furthermore, I will also be working as an intern at the Centre for Cancer of a renowned hospital in Mumbai in order to learn more about the existing techniques being used in treatment and how improvements can be made. Moreover, I'm trained in psycho-oncology and work as a Counselor for Cancer Patients Aid Association. This has given me insight to the grievances of the cancer patients, who I dedicate my work to. It has enabled me to work for society's benefit and learn more through personal interactions.
My scientific work is broadened by a summer research project at IIT, investigating the effects of urban development in Varanasi, on the quality of water of River Ganges. This project has given me experience in advanced lab work and the opportunity to better understand chemical testing and fieldwork by interacting with MSc students, research scholars, etc. These experiences have made me more independent and stronger, mentally.
申请者用2、3段谈自己的主要实验研究——在 IIT-瓦拉纳西做关于胆囊癌的生物信息学研究。申请者收获了生物医学上的知识，和独立自强的性格，重点突出。小伙伴们可以将重点放在一个较牛的实验项目上，叙述的关键是以一个具体事例谈论对自己产生的影响。
Brand Ambassador of School, School Prefect and Student Council Member are some positions of leadership that have been bestowed on me. I was also chosen as the Head of Security for our school's cutural festival. These responsibilities have made me a better leader and have taught me teamwork, dedication and self-lessness. I was also felicitated by my school for outstanding achievement.
Success at India's AISSCE, obtaining high grades in GCE O-Levels and becoming an AP Scholar with Distinction are achievements that demonstrate my ability to adapt to education systems across the world. Studying mathematics has been a challenge that has helped me solve practical problems using mathematical models; representations; and analyse better.
申请者谈到了在学校的活动与职务，包括成为学校品牌大使、学生会成员，在活动中取得高分等，这些内容很好地展示了申请者学习能力强，积极活跃的品质。
The natural sciences have given me an understanding of: the functioning of the the various entities in existence, their problems and how technology can be used to solve them. Biology, in particular, has made me realise the need for the application of engineering technology to cure the maladies that plague our world. As I aspire to eventually manage an R & D firm, the study of economics has taught me how the effective use of resources is essential to the success of an enterprise. Studying English has helped me communicate better, which is vital to any profession or relationship.
申请者有意识展示自身的综合学识，包括自然科学、生物、经济和英语上的学习，招生官很偏爱综合能力强的学生。
As a versatile, harmonius individual I indulge in other activities which include playing football for my school's team, bodybuilding and journalism. After winning an internship at a national newspaper, I worked for the Times of India as a Student Reporter. I have great passion for music and I'm preparing for the Trinity Guildhall Grade 8 examination for classical guitar.
I have performed as a rapper and guitarist at numerous shows and have won at talent competitions, too. It gave me great joy to lead a team of volunteers to organize an art competition for mentally challenged children, a couple of years ago. Such activities have enriched me and shown me the importance of teamwork, organisation and time management.
这两段，申请者谈到自己的兴趣爱好，踢足球、健身、写新闻稿和弹吉他。申请者单独选出音乐，讲述了自己在无数表演上做rapper和吉他手的经历，主要谈了对其的影响，显得真实饱满。
Believing that biomedical engineering can revolutionise healthcare and medicine, I anxiously await the opportunity to further my education in order to contribute towards the evolution of technology and thus the welfare of society.
最后总结，表达对申请高校生物医学工程专业的热切期盼。
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