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2018利兹大学国际物理专业留学文书范文 “量体裁衣”制作一篇完美PS

2018年03月06日14:28 来源:小站整理作者:小站留学编辑
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摘要:留学文书是除标化成绩外最重要的申请材料,好的文书是“量体裁衣”而出的一份具有个人特色的文章,本文将带来成功申请利兹大学的文书范文一篇,小伙伴们赶紧学起来吧!

利兹大学是英国久负盛名的顶尖研究型大学之一,拥有6名诺贝尔奖得主,哥哥张国荣就曾就读该校。本文将带来成功申请该校国际物理专业的优质文书一篇,从学习到实习实践再到兴趣爱好,小伙伴都是如何安排文书内容的?下面一起来借鉴成功拿到利兹offer的文书范文吧!

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Since infancy, I have been intrigued as to how anything I came into contact with worked; however, the explanations I received were always either too vague or beyond my knowledge at the time, I have came to realize that the keyword for all my questions was physics, where the most complex phenomena of the universe can be explained by fitting small pieces of the puzzle into a structured theory. My passion for mathematics is another factor in my choice of physics as a degree subject. I find complex problems in both physics and mathematics very challenging, and this enables me to embrace physics as more than simply a major or a degree, but as a personal passionate.

开门见山,申请者在首段中即阐述了选择物理的原因——物理既是解决所有复杂问题的关键,在学习中又可以继续热爱数学。在个人陈述中,童靴们可以直述对申请专业的认识与感情,展示一个热情好学且有自我认识的学生形象。

Due to my school's offer of Core mathematics only in the AS and A2 level I am not able to study further pure maths in school, and therefore I'm self studying it at home. This would allow me to grasp the mathematical concepts in topics like the standard model which inspire me and motivate me to work harder; hence I approach the difficult most challenging questions with enthusiasm and an open mind.

申请者介绍了在家自学数学的情况,承接第一段,突出好学且激情满满的形象。

I participated in extra activities where I did practicals like measuring radioactivity, & power generation. Additionally I have taught extra classes for weaker students, helping them to achieve higher grades, and I have being elected as a prefect at school.

该段介绍课外活动,包括参与测量放射性和发电量实验,给成绩差的同学补习等,展现个人品质。

In summer 2008 I managed to seize the opportunity of shadowing a radiologist in the radiology department at the International Medical Centre, I was also given the opportunity to observe the planning and modelling stages of a new building where I attended the construction site. Watching the application of the laws of physics being carried out before my eyes was fantastic and an extra motivator for me.

申请者介绍了自己的实习实践,在国际医疗中心放射科实习、在建筑工地观察新大楼规划与建模工程等,并谈了对自己的影响。有较牛实习经验的小伙伴可以详写此段,谈谈自己起到的作用,对自己产生的影响。

Beyond scholastic matters, I'm interested in activities that require thinking, such as computer programming, website designing, and scientific researching. I also enjoy reading, solving complicated questions, helping people, and "tamseer", the art of wearing an Omani turban plus playing table tennis and swimming.

这一段介绍申请者兴趣爱好,包括编程、网站设计、科学研究、阅读、助人等。个人陈述兴趣爱好部分,如果只是想展示申请者的兴趣广泛,可以略写,突出主次。

I am preparing myself to do my AS exams in the January session 2009 and the A2 exams in the May/June session. I am very optimistic to achieve the high grades expected for me by my teachers.I also managed to represent the Sultanate in an international youth convention at the Seychelles. I was the head delegate. Moreover I have handled the Coordination of many charity gatherings. I am as well the MISMUN coordinator and Head delegate of the 2009 MUN delegation team.

In 2006, I was awarded the "International Student Award for the Middle East region" by the Council of International Schools, and during my scholastic years, I have been awarded the Certificate of Academic Superiority, Certificate of Merit with distinction and Principal's Honour Roll with High Distinction almost every year.

这两段介绍申请者近期的计划,并再次强效自己在学习和活动上的优异表现。

I intend to continue with my post-graduation studies for the future, in the fields of either Nuclear or quantum physics, and then continue to get a PhD. Thus I will be able to benefit other students at universities by being a lecturer to earn a living, in addition to conducting my own research in my field of physics in the same university or research centre to achieve my ultimate goal of doing something major in the world.

最后总结,作者希望在研究生学习中能深入研究核物理或量子物理,并继续攻读博士学位,并表达了自身的愿景。

个人陈述的写作不能一概而论,一定要选取自己熟悉和有特色的点来写。有的学习好实验做的多,可以重点突出学习和科研能力;有的课外活动多,经验丰富,可以重点突出综合能力;有的在各项上表现平平,可以选择讲一个对自己产生了较大影响的故事,以真诚动人。主次分明,量体裁衣,学会运用具体例子“讲故事”是一篇合格的文书应该具备的要点。


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