2018雷丁大学留学文书范文 环境科学专业个人陈述(PS)分享
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本文书作者拿到了兰彻斯特大学、东英吉利亚大学、雷丁大学3所高校环境科学专业的offer，一起来看看申请者凭什么成功拿住3所高校招生官。
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Nuclear wars, pandemics, asteroid strikes and climate change. What do they all have in common? They could all lead to human extinction. What don’t they have in common? Only one of them is an issue today. Climate change.
第一段即展示申请者的深刻见解，用两个自问自答很自然地引出本文“环境”相关主题——气候变化。
People are obsessed with catastrophe films. Our morbid fascination with seeing an alternative outcome to theoretical scenarios is a multi-billion dollar industry. Maybe we want to shake up our lives a little. Perhaps we simply want to be the hero. Either way, our cinematic masochism sees no bounds when it comes to watching humanity ceasing to exist in the time it takes for Michael Bay to blow up five buildings and destroy three others. The problem is that lately, seeing the Statue of Liberty submerged for the umpteenth time is considered boring. But what happens when it becomes our reality?
申请者以灾难电影为例。电影中的灾难情节会触动观众，但并没有啥实际影响，但是如果它真的发生了呢?申请者的思路可以说是非常奇特，但又引人入胜，致使招生官不自觉想要去了解这个人对环境的看法。
This is why I would like to study environmental science at university. I want to understand the challenges we face as humans from something much bigger than us so I can do something to promote a more sustainable future. I want to know more about the efficacy of conservation, the importance of feedback mechanism and the consequences of permafrost thaw. I am also very interested in atmospheric sciences with an emphasis on meteorology. Doing an A-Level in Geography has been extremely rewarding and enjoyable so far. I am amazed by how diverse it is and while I enjoy the human part of it, I will always love the physical more. I feel that doing an EPQ on whether or not the European Union should be classified as a superpower has helped me tremendously in terms of improving my skills, such as time management due to our weekly deadlines. I also think that my investigative and graphical skills have improved because of my need to find and analyse very complex data.
本段扯回主题：学习环境科学专业的原因——希望获得一个更宏观的视野来理解我们面临的挑战，并为了一个可持续的未来做点事。在本段中，申请者谈专业学习内容，包括A-Level中的地理、物理课程学习，对世界问题的专业思考，以及具备调查和绘图技能。
The prospect of field trips excites me no end because I absolutely love learning more about other places. Spending three days in Shropshire for my geography exam in November was really fun and relaxing, and it also allowed me to learn more about less developed places in the UK. I love to travel and every year I go on a road trip to Hungary which, in my opinion, makes me much more open to other cultures. It’s fascinating to see how a border, which is technically an imaginary line, can result in such drastic changes in customs, beliefs and the overall quality of life. This is why I would like to spend a year abroad at university, to experience something very different, something that would benefit me in the long run and something that would provide me with a new, exciting challenge. My biggest challenge to date has been moving to London from Hungary at the age of twelve. Not being able to speak English before, I found the whole experience very surreal at first, but as time progressed, so did I. My school was very supportive of me and therefore I love giving back by participating in as many things as I can. For example, I help out a lot with young students who struggle with reading and writing. This doesn’t just improve my communication skills, but I also have to be able to explain things clearly and concisely.
During my GCSEs, I went on a school trip organised by my Geography teacher to Italy, and fulfilled my childhood dream of visiting Pompeii and Mount Vesuvius. After climbing the latter, I was astonished by how enormous it was and for the first time, I could imagine the destruction a single volcano was capable of causing. My sudden epiphany was definitely responsible for my newly sparked interest in volcanology and I am very happy to have the option to continue to delve deeper into the subject at university.
这两段谈申请者的兴趣爱好和课余活动，旅行是其学习更多的一个途径，申请者举了12岁从匈牙利到伦敦以及在中学时去庞贝和维苏威火山的例子，一个好学且热情、视野开阔的学生形象跃然纸上。
In conclusion, Part VI of the “Stern Review” by Nicholas Stern inspired me to look into the Kyoto Protocol and the transformation of the energy systems, as these will play a crucial part in the race for a more sustainable future. This links in with what I would like to do in the future as I want to pursue a career in climate diplomacy.
最后一段，申请者以未来计划做总结，希望未来能在气候外交上有所发展。
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