2017年英国格洛斯特郡学院优质文书范文分享 艺术生留学文书看这里!
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格洛斯特郡学院，原名格洛斯特郡艺术与技术学院，该校是英国最大的一所成教学院，学院开设了很多领域的教育与培训项目，包换高中A-Level、GCSE、职业和资格教育、夜校、短期商业课程、业余课程及对海外学生开放的ESL英语课程。同时，格洛斯特郡学院在艺术生留学中享有盛名，本文将与大家分享成功申请该校产品设计专业的优质文书一篇，看申请者如何介绍自己从做木笛到造小房子的经历，话不多说，上干货!
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Building and creating is what sparked my interest in buildings and creating new things so when it came to school I favoured DT and followed this path on through my academic school life up to A-levels. The aspect I most enjoy is the problem solving side of it. Being given a basic problem and having to create a solution, the idea of creating something new that has never been done is exciting. Furthermore you are also helping people by making a product ergonomically usable for them or simply a better way of doing it for existing users. It is good to know what you are doing is making a difference.
点评：首段描述对产品设计的兴趣，由此引出申请者在专业学习上的追求。不仅如此，申请者从设计专业看到了更深的意义：除了创造性解决问题，还能从人体工程学上提供给人们有用的产品，继而对社会产生影响。招生官非常欣赏对所申请专业充满热忱的学生。
I have always been practical and creative so I took my ideas outside of the classroom. As a hobby I BMX so after my first project in DT where I worked with wood in year 10, I was lucky enough to get timber and build myself a half pipe which has lasted many years. This helped me learn how to work with different tools and understand how structures work. This was a good learning curve to broaden my understanding and skills because of this small project I completed it has inspired me to keep on creating. Due to my development of skills and ideas I aim to create more complex projects than the ramp, at the moment I have been inspired by a programme (George Clarks amazing spaces). Since there is a lack of space for quiet undisturbed work area and an area to relax during the summer. From this I have drawn out a few designs for a shed and began to build up a project. It will be built at the back of my garden to be a studio/summer house, with only recycled pallets and other waste materials I can acquire. With all my projects I prefer to incorporate waste or recycled material because of the decline of resource over the years and the high price of premium timber however to make sure the structure is sound I will have to use new nail and screws etc. Otherwise rusty ones would compromise the structure which would be unsafe.
点评：这一段是比较核心且有趣的，申请者描述其造东西的经历，从用木头做一个半管到参加空间改造节目，给自己做一个小屋，这一段经历非常的自然且真实。申请者甚至提到了废物利用，一个动手能力超强且很有想法的好学者形象跃然纸上。
I am currently studying Product design, Geography and business. After looking around Universities on open days and the videos of all the fascinating projects you get to do, Product design was clearly the course I want to take. The way it is set out works well with my working style. It is a subject I thoroughly enjoy, I have been able to demonstrate this over my academic years due to me working well through the course and meeting deadlines.
I believe I am capable to be on the course but admit I have had to work hard on my perspective drawing and computer prototypes designs to get them up to a standard where I can portray my designs ideas across. I taught myself how to use google sketch up and was taught to use Spaceclaim and 2D design. If there is new programmes to learn on the course I will want to learn them because it will aid me in my future of Product design. Also this year I was awarded with a certificate for an outstanding achievement in AS design & technology: 3D product design due to me getting one of the highest results in my year.
点评：这两段申请者谈基础课程学习，既夸耀自己的优势课程——产品设计，又指出自己的不足——绘图与计算机原型设计，并提出了有效的解决方法。申请者在这两段上的处理非常的机智，人物形象更加真实饱满，敢于承认不足，但善于思考，不断改进自我的学生，招生官怎么可能会不爱!
Personally I am an outgoing, friendly and honest individual. I believe keeping active is important, I do this with my hobbies such as skiing and going to my local gym. I do this often due to realising that it helps to keep stress levels down so I can work efficiently without distractions. From playing team sports throughout my life I have learnt how to be effective in a team which helped me during my school life and will in the future to fit well into teamed work environment. Therefore due to my experiences this will help me fit into the course well and University life itself.
点评：这段谈性格品质，申请者从兴趣爱好谈起，喜欢滑冰和锻炼，最重要的还是提到这些兴趣都对申请者起到了哪些作用。
I look forward to carrying on my product design interest at a higher level as an undergraduate at your university so I can get my degree and carry on a career In Product design.
整篇文书的精华在中间三段，申请者谈自身的设计经历，谈为了设计所进行的基础学科学习，显示了对设计的热忱。艺术生在准备留学文书时，可以参考这篇文书内容，讲述自己如何走上艺术之路的故事，人生第一次舞蹈比赛是什么样，第一支自创歌曲是怎样产生的，这些都会对招生官产生吸引力。
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