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2018计算机专业留学文书范文 “吃鸡”也是我爱计算机的一大理由啊!

2018年01月22日16:28 来源:小站整理作者:小站留学编辑
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摘要:计算机专业是当下留学前景最靠谱的专业之一,本文将带来斯旺西大学计算机科学优质文书一篇,该文书有很多可取之处。另外,文后附有徳蒙福特大学、威斯敏斯特大学、埃塞克斯大学等大学优质文书范文,计算机专业的小伙伴赶紧来补充下新鲜血液。

海外不少名校招生官透露审阅一篇文书的时间是2-3分钟左右,如何在这短短的时间里向其展示你的个人魅力是一门很大的学问。下面这篇斯旺西大学的文书范文以新颖取胜,申请者巧妙引用了乔布斯名言、讲述3岁时偷玩计算机的故事、谈到将计算机运用到日常学习生活中、提及年轻人感兴趣的电竞游戏……一起来欣赏吧~

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2018计算机专业留学文书范文 “吃鸡”也是我爱计算机的一大理由啊!图1

范文一:

Swansea University, Computer Science Personal Statement

斯旺西大学 计算机科学个人陈述

Computers themselves, and software yet to be developed, will revolutionize the way we learn.”

– Steve Jobs. This one quote, is something that makes me want to be educated, and educate

others through the uses of technology. If it wasn’t for the era I grew up in, I wouldn’t be as grateful for today’s technology as others are today.

点评:申请者在开头引用了乔布斯的一段名言:计算机本身,以及尚未开发的软件,将彻底改变我们学习的方式。”恰到好处的说明问题,正是计算机对现代社会的强大影响使“我”想要接受学习和教育他人如何运用科技。

From the earliest moments off my life that I can remember, I was always amazed by computers. I vividly remember the joy I got from using my Dad’s PC for the first time at the age of 3 years old. Ever since that day I have been hooked. From Nintendo, Playstation, Xbox to PC’s, I have been gaming and enjoying the brilliance of today’s technology all of my life. An education in Computer Science was something I dreamt of from a young age. To be able to study a course that not only interested me, but I genuinely enjoyed was all I wanted.

点评:好的文书都应该有一个好的故事,申请者回忆了在三岁时偷玩老爹电脑的搞笑片段,热爱计算机的种子就此生根发芽,To be able to study a course that not only interested me, but I genuinely enjoyed was all I wanted.与众不同的是申请者强调了这并不仅是兴趣使然,还是乐在其中。这一段可以说成功吸引了招生官。

I am currently studying Computing and IT in Gower College Swansea. Last year I complete my A Leel in Graphics, I feel that this course has helped improve both my creativity and design thus complimenting the visionary skills needed when studying my current A level subjects. Outside of my graphics lectures I enjoy creating my own graphical designs as a hobby including designing logos for teams which compete inside of eSports. Unfortunately, my previous school did not quite have the up to date technical facilities to really allow me to explore computing as far as I would have liked. However, during my time at college I have no had access to such equipment and I am thoroughly enjoying the opportunity to really expand my horizons.

点评:申请者谈A-level课程学习,重点提到绘图,并举了为谋个电子竞技团队设计徽标的例子,展示了申请者在动手实践、设计和创造上的可能性。

Computing has definitely made me more aware of how higher education works as I am constantly having to carry out my own personal research in my spare time to help aid me. My problem solving skills have been influenced the most by this course due to the coding which I find very challenging in some stages, but very rewarding when it is solved. My IT course relates to the subject I wish to study also. From Networking to how Teams within ICT work,I have really been enlighted as to the world of IT and how it plays such a functional, extensive and essential part of many elements of life.

点评:这一段比较有意思,申请者别出心裁提到了计算机在日常学习中起到的作用,这是一般人想不到的,这就是专业与生活相结合最好的表现了。

In my spare time, I like to help students with less knowledge on the course develop their skills during workshops within College. I find this extremely rewarding as I am able to pass on what I have learned to help others as well as sharpening my own communication skills I am a very outgoing person and love to become the best in what I do.

I am very interested in Astronomy and really enjoy watching documentaries, going to events and even star gazing in my spare time. I would really enjoy working in the space industry when I am older within the Computer Science side of things.

Another hobby of mine is gaming, this is one of the factors which lead me to becoming so interested in Computer Science. I am currently in a team for the game Counter Strike: Global Offensive. I have watched the Counter Strike franchise grow over the years and I have always been amazed by e-sports and everything surrounding it. I have attended 1 LAN event for Counter Strike with my team and we are also very active with online tournaments. I feel like Counter Strike has given me the opportunity to meet many great people who I can now call friends, from all over Europe. I believe that e-Sports and my activities in them help me learn to talk and meet with people from all over the world who are interested in the same things as me, I would also, in my future, love to work on creating and designing games and I feel that my huge interest in e-Sports would help me with this.

点评:这三段围绕申请者的课余时间展开,包括帮本科同学补课、观看纪录片、电子竞技等,申请者提到电子竞技是其对计算机感兴趣的一大原因,很实诚的宝宝了,如果大家在文书中提到我是因为吃鸡爱上计算机的,估计会很吸睛!

Overall, I feel that I am an extremely hardworking and creative person who wants to challenge myself in the future. I hope that studying Computing in University will help strengthen my knowledge of the subject and find me a successful career in the future in a field surrounding my topic.

点评:结尾表达对继续在计算机专业上留学深造期盼。

范文二:

De Montford University, Computer Science Personal Statement

徳蒙福特大学 计算机专业个人陈述

My fascination with technology was sparked when, as a child I thought it would be a great idea to take apart my Playstation console. Aware of the danger, I was still eager to see how it all worked inside. I find it intriguing how fast society has been shaped and continues to be, by the influence of Computer Science. A few years ago if someone were to have claimed that cars would become autonomous, people would have doubted them. Now we are at a stage where nearly anything is possible and this is due to the relentless problem solving of computer scientists. The latest software update released by Tesla motors allows their cars to learn how to drive themselves, and is an example of artificial intelligence, a sector which I am most interested in. I want to study Computer Science because I want to gain the knowledge needed to be able to help find solutions to world problems, with the efficient use of computer technology. With the knowledge and skills, I will attain from this course, the creative ideas that I could bring into fruition would be endless. I hope to become one of the computer scientists who adapt technology to help the human race evolve. One possibility would be for artificially intelligent gadgets to recognise different people and adjust to their individual needs based on personal preferences. I have been teaching myself Objective-C syntax in my spare time and have completed online programming courses, which have allowed me to explore the endless possibilities that computer science can bring to the world. I have also learnt to create a simple iOS game using Apple’s syntax called ‘Swift’, in XCode alongside Photoshop.

I understand that computer science is not just about programming and hardware but also about the ethics entailed in the process of a design as well as innovative thinking. Studying A-Level Philosophy and Ethics has given me an insight into many ethical situations that may arise around computer science such as the creation of artificial intelligence. This raises controversy of whether or not we should be trying to create artificial intelligence, as people have different beliefs and faiths. One example of such controversy was during the development of Honda’s Asimo robot when engineers had to visit the Vatican to seek permission to continue the project due to how human-like the robot was developed to walk. During a week of volunteering on NCS I visited Wazoku, the creators of an idea-sharing software used by major corporations such as Waitrose and The BBC. I was given an insight into the working environment that I hope to join after completing my degree. I am applying for work experience at Wazoku, in order to learn about how the software industry can influence the progress of companies.

I am constantly seeking to learn new skills and gain experience from various activities. I have been a member of the RAF Air Cadets for four years, where I have learnt many valuable life skills such as discipline, leadership, charity and confidence. Alongside these life skills I have gained various qualifications such as The St. John’s Ambulance Youth First Aid qualification and Leading Cadet qualification. Being a cadet also involved doing charity work such as raising money for the RAF Benevolence Fund and the Poppy Appeal. Through all these experiences I have learnt how to work with people from all walks of life, different backgrounds and people who have different beliefs and ideas to the ones I do. This has enabled me to adjust my approach to solving different problems and situations.

Technological advancements take place around us everyday, from the evolution of bulky antenna phones into smart phones to the introduction of smart virtual assistants such as Apple’s Siri, Google Now and Windows’ Cortana. I am inspired by the fact that computer science has become a fundamental element in the development of a better, smarter future for our world and my goal is to be part of that development process.


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