2018建筑学专业留学申请文书范文：建筑是生活的必需品(附QS2017建筑专业TOP25)
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建筑学是艺术类留学中的热门，2017QS世界大学建筑专业排名中，麻省理工、伦敦大学学院、代尔夫特理工大学(荷兰)居前三位。该专业融合了艺术、科学和技术，这要求学生在数学、工程学和艺术鉴赏上有一定理解力。如果你想在建筑学上留学深造，下面两篇申请文书范文将引导你了解名校招生官希望这一专业申请者具备哪些素质。
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2017年QS建筑专业TOP25院校
范文一：
University of Greenwich, Architecture Personal Statement
格林威治大学 建筑专业个人陈述
Buildings are a necessity in life, and I would like to be the next innovative mind that will produce works as extraordinary as that of Renzo Piano, Sir Norman Foster and Zaha Hadid. Neo-Futurism is a movement that interests me because of the mix between art and technology which can be shown in works such as Wembley Stadium or The Shard. I think this course will let me showcase my creative, team work and IT skills that are fundamental in this field.
点评：建筑是生活的必需品——首段展现对申请专业的热爱很有必要哦。意大利建筑大师伦佐·皮亚诺、英国建筑家诺曼·福斯特、伊拉克裔英国女建筑师扎哈·哈迪德……这些现当代建筑学界的大牛一下提高了PS的逼格，艺术最容易受大师影响啦。
Art is a regular hobby of mine, and studying it in school not only made me experiment with different media and techniques, but at A2, it allowed me to think like an artist and understand, for example, the symbolism of a Pre-Raphaelite painting such as Ophelia. Not having studied Art at GCSE meant that I had to learn new techniques such as mono-printing or dry point within a short amount of time and this progress is shown in my AS sketchbooks.
点评：这段介绍建筑的基础学识——艺术。申请者很有意识地提及自己在艺术初级学习上的欠缺，申请者通过短时间的学习具备了绘画的基础技能，展现自己的超强学习力，可以说很有心机了。
Mathematics is a subject I have enjoyed throughout my school years, however I believe my AS grade does not reflect my full potential. Classical Civilisation was a subject that I thoroughly enjoyed at GCSE. The modules within the course led me to research about the history of architecture during the Greek and Roman periods. I learned about the detail in which buildings were designed, from the frieze on temples to common buildings such as homes and various key elements which reflected a part of their culture.
点评：紧跟第二段，申请者谈了数学、古典文明的学习。这些都是建筑所学要的基础学识。申请者提及这些课程帮助其了解建筑如何被设计出来的细节，抓住了文书的主题。
English Literature allowed me to broaden my knowledge of Literature by studying novels and poems. This subject has also taught me how to understand someone else’s opinion and counteract with a valid argument through essay-writing and class debates. I feel that this quality will be helpful when discussing social and environmental aspects of designing buildings.
Computing enables me to understand the way in which a system works, and the opportunity to create my own system as part of my A2 unit led me to understand several aspects of computers such as programming, creating databases and working with clients. I have been interested in CAD since I was introduced to it briefly during Textiles Technology at GCSE and since then, I have practiced personal projects with programs such as Photoshop and AutoCAD.
点评：四、五段继续谈基础学识，包括英语文学和计算机。英语文学对在设计时讨论社会和环境方面的问题很有帮助，计算机技能则在设计绘图(ps)上产生作用。个人陈述提及其他学科的学识积累时，一定要不露声色地扯回所申请的专业上，使主旨突出哦。
I enjoy helping with teaching lower school students as I usually help out in art lessons on a weekly basis and have also taken part in a peer mentoring scheme in which I was able to guide Year 11 students for their GCSE exams. This is something from which I gained an insight about taking on responsibility and having leadership skills. This year I am also part of the Student Council, and as a sixth form student, it is my responsibility to ensure that input from all key stages are being taken into account during organisation of events or simply for new changes.
点评：这段围绕学校活动展开，包括辅导低年级学生艺术课，参加学生会。出现了responsibility、leadership等招生官欣赏的表个人能力的词。
Volunteering weekly at Cancer Research helps me gain customer service and work as part of a team for an important cause. I also read novels, and often write works of fiction, including topics such as mystery, crime and coming of age.
点评：课外活动和兴趣爱好——每周在肿瘤研究上的志愿活动、阅读和写作小说。不是突出的亮点可以略写。
I regularly play badminton and I would like to carry this hobby with me to university. Recently I have enrolled on an online course for creative writing in order to broaden my writing skills. A personal visit to Bath earlier this year also heightened this interest in past architectural designs from the Greek and Roman periods and the elements which we still may use today such as arches or aqueducts. I would like to study Architecture at university because I believe that a combination of my skills and creativity will let me integrate well within this course. I am keen to learn about how current technology is used to develop extraordinary and unique buildings, taking culture, nature or even the past as inspiration.
点评：这段涉及兴趣爱好，包括打羽毛球和参加线上写作。申请者再次表达在大学继续学习建筑的强烈愿望。“I am keen to learn about how current technology is used to develop extraordinary and unique buildings, taking culture, nature or even the past as inspiration.”小伙伴们可以引用这句表达对现代建筑的强烈感情哦!
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